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PostSubject: My Clear View   My Clear View EmptyMon Oct 10, 2011 9:57 am

My Clear View

For a moment I was blinded toward all that you offered me.
I didn’t see the depth of your love.
I looked past your desires, and on to others for a richer fulfillment.
You continued to seek, welcome and want my friendship.
As time passed; my eyes cleared, I grew and
I finally saw what you were offering… you.

You are the best friend that I have ever had.
I can’t imagine life without you.
Your tender heart touches my soul.
You are so precious and like a delicate flower,
you are a beauty to behold.

Your life is an outstanding example, it is pure.
There isn’t another pattern that could hold to yours.
Thank you.

My desire is to reflect you and all that you behold.



By: Rita Kellogg
(Valentines of 1992)



****In memory of Dorothy Templin, the love of my life, my grandmother and best friend.****
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PostSubject: Re: My Clear View   My Clear View EmptyMon Oct 10, 2011 12:09 pm

I first read this as though you were speaking of the Lord, and then I had to read it again after reading that it was about your grandmother. I am certain she was very touched by it. Nice work.
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PostSubject: Re: My Clear View   My Clear View EmptyMon Oct 10, 2011 4:30 pm

Nice piece, also thought it was for the Lord and it is because it Glorifies Him in honoring your Grandmother.

God Bless.
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