chele WRITER (51-100 posts)
Posts : 56 Join date : 2011-09-22 Location : South Carolina
| Subject: Mommy's Girls Fri Oct 14, 2011 2:24 am | |
| Sometimes I sit and Just watch you play My little Chelsey Brooke And Chyanne Renee
When you are sleeping I sneak in and look My Chyanne Renee And little Chelsey Brooke
And in those moments I find it hard to breathe Because I am so blessed It is hard to believe
Your names are a song My heart sings each day My little Chelsey Brooke and Chyanne Renee
God keep them safe Write thier names in Your Book My Chyanne Renee And little Chelsey Brooke |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: Mommy's Girls Fri Oct 14, 2011 2:34 am | |
| So sweet! I know the feeling!
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chele WRITER (51-100 posts)
Posts : 56 Join date : 2011-09-22 Location : South Carolina
| Subject: Re: Mommy's Girls Fri Oct 14, 2011 2:54 am | |
| Thanks Miss Thena! They are my little treasures! |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Mommy's Girls Fri Oct 14, 2011 12:01 pm | |
| Oh my goodness. That is so adorable. I know the feeling too, having had three boys. |
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worshipfreely WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 832 Age : 51 Join date : 2011-08-29 Location : Hillsboro OR
| Subject: Re: Mommy's Girls Fri Oct 14, 2011 12:53 pm | |
| Very sweet homage to children. I loved this part most:
Your names are a song My heart sings each day My little Chelsey Brooke and Chyanne Renee |
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cleo574 WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 542 Age : 77 Join date : 2011-08-18 Location : Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
| Subject: Re: Mommy's Girls Fri Oct 14, 2011 1:09 pm | |
| Having had two daughters, I can relate. It was beautiful and I felt a true mother's love. Keep up the good work. God bless Jan P |
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akingthomas100 PENCIL PUSHER (26-50 posts)
Posts : 32 Age : 44 Join date : 2011-10-05 Location : Mobile, Alabama
| Subject: Re: Mommy's Girls Fri Oct 14, 2011 5:17 pm | |
| This a great poem for bedtime rhymes and it will certainly soothe their ears. I really enjoyed reading this poem. |
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chele WRITER (51-100 posts)
Posts : 56 Join date : 2011-09-22 Location : South Carolina
| Subject: Re: Mommy's Girls Fri Oct 14, 2011 9:30 pm | |
| Thanks everyone! You guys rock! 8) |
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