Okay I have read most of the poems on here. One I read this morning lead me to write this.
It is called a palindrome or is supposed to be one. Please be totally honest if you decide to comment on this. I really need to know whats wrong with it so my next one can be better I hope. Don't worry I'm tough.
God Bless
God is here!!!
Blue Skies, Skies Blue
Crying eyes, eyes crying
Coming season’s cold hot
Unknown reasons for distraught
Children playing loudly
Men graying proudly
Women knitting steadily
Parents grieving dreadfully
Walk Proudly, Pray Proudly
Testify, Testify, Testify, Loudly
Coming Glory, Joyfully Cheer
God is near! God is here!!