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PostSubject: NO SUBSTITUTE   NO SUBSTITUTE EmptyMon Nov 07, 2011 6:56 am



There are many hurting people
Use the world to help their ills
Buying loads of useless fodder
Cults, Religions, Potions, Pills
satan's laughing at their pain
he wants them all to go to hell
Where the cries of screaming inmates
Toll their everlasting bell.

There's no substitute for Christ
No matter what we're going through
Though the world can help us out
It only lasts a day or two
Then the gnawing starts again
It cannot fill the God shaped hole
He's the only piece that fits
He's our only peace at all.
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PostSubject: Re: NO SUBSTITUTE   NO SUBSTITUTE EmptyMon Nov 07, 2011 10:58 am

So true. Isn't it strange how people will flock to a movie star or talk show person for their religion of the month and neglect God's Word?


He is the only piece that fits
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PostSubject: Re: NO SUBSTITUTE   NO SUBSTITUTE EmptyMon Nov 07, 2011 12:10 pm

Strong message. You sure didn't beat around the bush in this one. Love your work!
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PostSubject: Re: NO SUBSTITUTE   NO SUBSTITUTE EmptySat Nov 12, 2011 12:44 pm

Straight to the heart, no misunderstanding this message!
It's a good one too!

God Bless.

p.s.
I wanted to add more here but Jerry Springer is about to come on...

(just kidding)

Just so there's no misunderstanding my strange sense of humor,
Let me be clear...
I absolutely loved it !
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