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PostSubject: Her   Her EmptySun Jan 08, 2012 5:51 am

I get up as is my habit
Sometimes cause I want to
The rest my body says I better
Or else i will suffer the consequenses of solthfullness
You know the picture

But this morning is a little different
Yes the pains are still there
Yet there is something else that I must be doing
Someone special to me will soon be taking a trip
And I will surely miss her

My partner for life
Strength when I am weak
Joy to be around, even when we have to discuss
Those topics that are less than desirable
My very best friend here

Oh, Jesus is here and His presence is known
But her I can touch and hold, my completion
My main reason to continue this journey
As we have walked together many years
Soon to separate for a little while

I pray for her and yes shed a few tears
Where God has led us down through the years
Work, fun, bad food and lost sleep
Ministry and all that, in His hand He promiced to keep
Then why can't I go???

There's a line in an old country song,
Says, "I'm gonna miss her when I get home"
But she will be having a grand time, herself
And I know the price paid for the ticket
will be worth every penny paid.

WHEN SHE GETS BACK FROM EL SALVADOR
I BETTER GET MORE THAN A TEE SHIRT.

I sure love my wife.
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PostSubject: Re: Her   Her EmptySun Jan 08, 2012 5:54 am

oh...that was mean!
you almost had me in tears.
shame on you!

no tee shirt for you...boo!

Bro'...you ain't right.
love ya'!!
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PostSubject: Re: Her   Her EmptySun Jan 08, 2012 6:11 am

Well, THANK YOU, for the compliment. Just proof of what and how sometining is said, we must be so very careful about. I want to lead with words not sway the emotions. A fun little ditty for the morning.
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PostSubject: Re: Her   Her EmptyFri Jan 13, 2012 11:00 pm

I enjoyed that one. It kept me entertained, and I loved the sweet thoughts expressed about your wife.
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PostSubject: Re: Her   Her EmptySat Jan 14, 2012 5:18 pm

good point, i'll keep that in mind.
been giving it some thought actually.
nice work, bro'.
i'm not perfect and can be a real insensitive idiot at times.
it's the "knee jerk" still working on that!
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