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PostSubject: Flatlined   Flatlined EmptyTue Jan 17, 2012 7:39 pm

Nights roll into days, and days roll into nights

My mind, it sometimes strays when I turn out the lights

A crazy purple haze slowly sparks and ignites

Midnight dreams ablaze as the lowly serpent bites...



As the church bells rang, a single fang tears my skin

The noise of the the poison brings a rush from within

The venom flows deep as I weep of what I've done

A black sheep sleeping becomes a wolf he can't outrun

Jekyll and Hyde, but I can't hide from me

I no longer want to be who I wanted to be

The serpent haunted me and hunted me and dragged me away

My heroin becomes my heroine as she gets me through the day

Morphine morphing into a seamless transition

of a room within a room within a room with a mortician

A tomb within a tomb, as I lay lifeless on a gurney

Born to cry, born to die, as I ride my final journey

Forgive me, everybody, for the hurt I put you through

Faces blend together of the names I never knew

/\_/\_/\___________

Flatlined, rewind...lost my heart and lost my mind

until I finally found the Light I was dying to find




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PostSubject: Re: Flatlined   Flatlined EmptyWed Jan 18, 2012 7:53 am

very awesome brotha'!!
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PostSubject: Re: Flatlined   Flatlined EmptyWed Jan 18, 2012 5:16 pm

You're a master at packing a punch. Awesome work, powerful message!
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