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PostSubject: I jump   I jump EmptyThu Apr 05, 2012 8:47 pm

When the world tries to beat me and throw me into a slump

I stand, I walk, I run, I jump...


Lord, I've fallen, please take my hand

Hold me tight tonight, help me stand

It's not my first time down, and it won't be the last

but I'll fall less in the future if I remember my past


I rise once more, though on wobbly legs

You've heard the cries as a lost soul begs

You've caught the tears, you've held your wrath

and you've prepared the way so I can walk my path


There's a force all around and it's chasin' me down

doin' everything it can to ease the tears of a clown

It used to confuse me, but now I know what to do

Instead of runnin' away, I now run straight to you


Your love is that force, your love is the sun

exploding in my heart, never apart, always one

Up, up and above, flying higher than a dove

It only takes a leap of faith to jump into your love


The world may slow me down, but it's just a speed-bump

for I stand, I walk, I run, I jump...
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PostSubject: Re: I jump   I jump EmptyThu Apr 05, 2012 10:44 pm

This one put a smile on my face all the way through. I just love your style.

I rise once more, though on wobbly legs

You've heard the cries as a lost soul begs

You've caught the tears, you've held your wrath

and you've prepared the way so I can walk my path


Your love is that force, your love is the sun

exploding in my heart, never apart, always one

Up, up and above, flying higher than a dove

It only takes a leap of faith to jump into your love
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PostSubject: Re: I jump   I jump EmptyFri Apr 06, 2012 12:18 am

It only takes a leap of faith to jump into your love

This line is brilliant and beautiful, love the whole concept of this piece.
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