rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: I jump Thu Apr 05, 2012 8:47 pm | |
| When the world tries to beat me and throw me into a slump
I stand, I walk, I run, I jump...
Lord, I've fallen, please take my hand
Hold me tight tonight, help me stand
It's not my first time down, and it won't be the last
but I'll fall less in the future if I remember my past
I rise once more, though on wobbly legs
You've heard the cries as a lost soul begs
You've caught the tears, you've held your wrath
and you've prepared the way so I can walk my path
There's a force all around and it's chasin' me down
doin' everything it can to ease the tears of a clown
It used to confuse me, but now I know what to do
Instead of runnin' away, I now run straight to you
Your love is that force, your love is the sun
exploding in my heart, never apart, always one
Up, up and above, flying higher than a dove
It only takes a leap of faith to jump into your love
The world may slow me down, but it's just a speed-bump
for I stand, I walk, I run, I jump...
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: I jump Thu Apr 05, 2012 10:44 pm | |
| This one put a smile on my face all the way through. I just love your style.
I rise once more, though on wobbly legs
You've heard the cries as a lost soul begs
You've caught the tears, you've held your wrath
and you've prepared the way so I can walk my path
Your love is that force, your love is the sun
exploding in my heart, never apart, always one
Up, up and above, flying higher than a dove
It only takes a leap of faith to jump into your love |
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worshipfreely WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 832 Age : 51 Join date : 2011-08-29 Location : Hillsboro OR
| Subject: Re: I jump Fri Apr 06, 2012 12:18 am | |
| It only takes a leap of faith to jump into your love
This line is brilliant and beautiful, love the whole concept of this piece.
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