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Malakhim
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PostSubject: A Sailor's Commission   A Sailor's Commission EmptySun Aug 26, 2012 7:15 pm
Oh, sailor!
Maintain your composure!
The captain has us covered in all of our endeavors
Hope!
Drop anchor your soul
Batten down the hatches and set sail from the shore
Like your mother always said "ships may be safe in the harbor but thats not what theyre made for!"
With a pat on the back your father agreed, "son Im so proud that you were created to succeed"
With a bow of a head, and a bag of seeds
I set to sail the seven seas.
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PostSubject: Re: A Sailor's Commission   A Sailor's Commission EmptyTue Aug 28, 2012 11:22 pm
Awesome work! You're a very talented poet. I love the metaphors you used and the dialog you included. It gave it that extra pizazz. I love it.
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PostSubject: Re: A Sailor's Commission   A Sailor's Commission EmptyWed Aug 29, 2012 1:45 pm
Enjoyed this very much!
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oneagleswings
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PostSubject: Re: A Sailor's Commission   A Sailor's Commission EmptyWed Aug 29, 2012 1:54 pm
Aaaargh...matey agreed, just don't be shovin' off without ye' compass!
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Malakhim
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PostSubject: Re: A Sailor's Commission   A Sailor's Commission EmptyWed Aug 29, 2012 2:14 pm
Thank Yall so much! this is about my surrender to ministry! and my compass is only a prayer away! :P
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PostSubject: Re: A Sailor's Commission   A Sailor's Commission EmptyWed Aug 29, 2012 2:15 pm
AMEN!
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PostSubject: Re: A Sailor's Commission   A Sailor's Commission EmptyFri Aug 31, 2012 2:04 pm
Sail on, my friend, and know that we're here to help hoist the sails in fair weather, and hold the rudder true, during the storms. Blessings
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