Len Williams Carver
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 |  Subject: TORN AND TATTERED Fri Nov 02, 2012 2:01 am | |
| Torn and Tattered oh my soul God has forgiven my sins Washed me whole Kneeling in prayer God doesn’t care Denim or Lace Tis the heart He hears Torn and tattered unable to hear Like her loving grams Wish she were here Grams shawl of prayer My old jeans tattered God’s voice saying “My child the clothes they do not matter” Share this:  
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Thena
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| | Subject: Re: TORN AND TATTERED Sat Nov 03, 2012 2:17 pm | |
| Reminds me of my gram and her family Bible.
Also reminds me of her prayers.
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Len Williams Carver
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| | Subject: Re: TORN AND TATTERED Sat Nov 03, 2012 2:51 pm | |
| THENA GLAD I could give you a nice memory, there is a photo that goes with this but I couldn't get it to post. God Bless:) |
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Lora
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| | Subject: Re: TORN AND TATTERED Sat Nov 03, 2012 3:04 pm | |
| Beautiful work. It made me a little misty. Also, you can follow this LINK for detailed instructions on how to get pictures from your computer into your posts. |
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Len Williams Carver
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| | Subject: Re: TORN AND TATTERED Sat Nov 03, 2012 3:11 pm | |
| Thank you Lora I shall try again! :) |
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Thena
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| | Subject: Re: TORN AND TATTERED Sat Nov 03, 2012 3:42 pm | |
| I will check back for the photo.
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Lora
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| | Subject: Re: TORN AND TATTERED Sat Nov 03, 2012 4:24 pm | |
| Oh, that's beautiful. It's perfect for that poem! It really completes the work. |
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Len Williams Carver
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Location : KANSAS
| | Subject: Re: TORN AND TATTERED Sat Nov 03, 2012 4:42 pm | |
| thank you I am so glad I finally got the glitch fixed through word press that let me post here finally !! I look forward to writing short stories and reading others of like mind. God Bless:) |
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