Jak Hardy WRITER (51-100 posts)
POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 82 Age : 27 Join date : 2011-11-07 Location : Sunshine Coast, Australia
| Subject: Mirrors Fri May 31, 2013 6:22 pm | |
| Cerulean skies, oceans deep, Mirrors of a glorious saviour, Rolling hills of vibrant green, Reflections of a plan before time.
Blanketed canvas of cotton fields, Mirrors of a sin wiped clean, Reddened clay now hard as stone, Reflections of a God made known.
Grey and ruined, bandaids set in high, Mirrors of a terrible pride, Black as night, holed and crumbling, Reflections of the judgment due.
Tanned, now scarlet, a sun setting low, Mirrors of a new dawn. Like the son, this Moon reflects a brighter call, Reflections of a Lamb who died once for all. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Mirrors Fri May 31, 2013 6:43 pm | |
| Writing flows...titles don't, isn't it strange how that works? What can I possibly comment on your writing...i'm a fan too!
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rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: Re: Mirrors Sun Jun 02, 2013 11:16 pm | |
| I'm glad it's not just me. I sometimes spend more time trying to title a poem than I spent writing it. True story. Another true story; fantastic poem! Absolutely. |
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Jak Hardy WRITER (51-100 posts)
POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 82 Age : 27 Join date : 2011-11-07 Location : Sunshine Coast, Australia
| Subject: Re: Mirrors Mon Jun 03, 2013 4:50 pm | |
| It's so true. I think it's harder than actually writing the poem sometimes. It's probably my least favourite part of writing! |
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