Jak Hardy WRITER (51-100 posts)
POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 82 Age : 27 Join date : 2011-11-07 Location : Sunshine Coast, Australia
| Subject: Oceans Fri May 31, 2013 6:16 pm | |
| Come like the ocean, Waves growing higher, Inundate my soul. Saturate the very depths, Bring refreshing, revealing and vital water.
Life to my dryness, bring Life to my dryness, Wrap yourself around me; Consume all that I am.
Let your life inundate my soul Saturate the very depths, Come endlessly on roaring tides, Constant as the cobalt sky.
Suffocate me in your presence, Drown me in your endless life, Let my last breath, Let each gasp Cry out for more; vitally desire.
Mould me with ferocious waves, Carry me the distance; refresh my soul. Inundate my everything, Saturate the very depths Until my heartbeat and your tide Are one rhythm; one call. Your ocean covering my shore. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Oceans Fri May 31, 2013 6:48 pm | |
| "in a dream breath epiphany you glide upon a crest of sea-foam engulf me like a tidal wave of spoken words i succumb to your undertow drown in your prose..." (from an old poem...I wrote many years ago)
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Jak Hardy WRITER (51-100 posts)
POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 82 Age : 27 Join date : 2011-11-07 Location : Sunshine Coast, Australia
| Subject: Re: Oceans Fri May 31, 2013 7:09 pm | |
| That's really good! Like, really, really Good! Can I read the full poem? |
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