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THelvig
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PostSubject: Wasted Life   Wasted Life EmptyFri Aug 26, 2011 1:14 pm

Help me please, for I am lost,
A victim of spiritual holocaust.
See me through, for I am blind,
Show me what it is I need to find.
Touch my hand, for I can't feel,
The rain, the wind, or anything real.
Whisper softly, though I can't hear,
Because your breath envelops my ear.
Drop of water, to quench my thirst,
Is all I ask before I burst.
Smell of misery burns my nose,
The scent of life sweet as a rose.
Please restore my strength in faith,
Without you God, it's all a waste.

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PostSubject: Re: Wasted Life   Wasted Life EmptyFri Aug 26, 2011 5:01 pm

I like the sensory input here. You really can feel this poem. Nice work.
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