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 Noah's Rainbow: An Optical Convenant

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Jak Hardy
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PostSubject: Noah's Rainbow: An Optical Convenant   Noah's Rainbow: An Optical Convenant EmptyTue Jan 10, 2012 7:26 pm

The crimson of blood, a covenant sealed,
A grace in scarlet divinely revealed.
The oranges of fire, of melting pain,
Judgment and suffering from which we are saved.
The yellow, the gold of the true and righteous light,
Is the brightness of a restored and renewed sight.
The green- the life and vibrant direction,
Of growth in spirit. Of a soul’s resurrection.
The cobalt blue of the daybreak’s sky,
A footrest- a mirror to the Most High.
The darkened tinge of indigo blue,
Of a miraculous King making all things new.
The enthroned colour of spectrum violet
Is the royal palace and the squares that tile it.

The final pigment on this palette,
Is one that shines and outshines them all.
It is the tint, the shade of divine love.
It is the complexion of the hand that softens our fall.
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PostSubject: Re: Noah's Rainbow: An Optical Convenant   Noah's Rainbow: An Optical Convenant EmptyFri Jan 13, 2012 10:46 pm

Beautiful piece. I love the title you chose for this one too. It's perfect. This one makes one's heart want to sing.
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PostSubject: Re: Noah's Rainbow: An Optical Convenant   Noah's Rainbow: An Optical Convenant EmptySat Jan 14, 2012 6:37 am

actually Lora...it is so beautiful, so visual, it's almost overwhelming.
anytime i can visualize something written it affects me deeply.
probably why i hadn't commented till now, who wants to spray graffiti on a thing of beauty?
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PostSubject: Re: Noah's Rainbow: An Optical Convenant   Noah's Rainbow: An Optical Convenant EmptySat Jan 14, 2012 12:48 pm

Yeah, how to comment on a perfect moment. That was truly lovely. Some people forget the rainbow is the symbol for God's promise.
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