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akingthomas100
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PostSubject: "Does It Make a Difference"   "Does It Make a Difference" EmptyTue Oct 11, 2011 10:49 am

If only I could relive my past
Would my life be any different!
If only more time was given towards life
Would my efveryday thoughts go further than they have?
If only hate was another name for love
My enemy.....would be be considered a friend?
If only patience was shown through us all
Temper.....would it have a positive reaction?
If only one could die by choice
The world.....wouyld it not come to an end?
If only the violence was controlleed from the start
Crime rates.....would it have a low percentage?
If only god had not created man
women.....would they even exist?
If only time had not been discovered
Night and day..... would it make a difference?
The sky, the sun, the moon, and the grounds on which we walk
Would these things even be visible.
It was HE and not I who said let there be light?
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PostSubject: Re: "Does It Make a Difference"   "Does It Make a Difference" EmptyThu Oct 13, 2011 6:32 pm

Those are a lot of tough questions. Thankfully they are nothing we really have to worry about:

It was HE and not I who said let there be light?

Great work. I like the struggle you put forth in this.
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PostSubject: Re: "Does It Make a Difference"   "Does It Make a Difference" EmptyFri Oct 14, 2011 4:06 pm

Thanks Lora!
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