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rhymarhyma
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rhymarhyma

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Join date : 2011-08-11
Location : Denver, CO

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PostSubject: Lost...and all alone   Lost...and all alone EmptyThu Aug 18, 2011 8:51 pm

I enter the center
the center of my heart
Weeping oh, so deeply, truly torn apart

How much pain, how much rain
can one heart take
How many tears throughout the years
before it starts to break
The lonely times, the lonely rhymes
No love of my own
My heart crumbles, blindly stumbles
lost...and all alone


I enter the center
the center of my mind
Sadness, madness, scared what I might find

I've seen too many scenes
that I shouldn't have seen
Homicide, suicide
everything in between
I try and block it, try and lock it
and find a safety zone
but I always find my mind
lost...and all alone


I enter the center
the center of my body
I cry for somebody, anybody....nobody

Sedated, desecrated
twisted and broken
My body's so shoddy
merely a token
Bruised and abused
down to the bone
With shaking hands it stands
lost...and all alone


I enter the center
the center of my soul
A light shining bright, giving me control

Giving back what I lack
the light is forgiving
Giving in, I can begin
to truly start living
I heal because I feel
true love being shown
and never was I ever
lost...and all alone
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christianonfire7
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Join date : 2011-08-13

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PostSubject: Re: Lost...and all alone   Lost...and all alone EmptyFri Aug 19, 2011 10:41 am

Wow...
I love the way you can rhyme so smoothly within your pieces, that alone is a gift for it's not an easy task, but you seem to make it flow very well. The power and truth behind this piece is so incredible, I love it!!
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