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scottn
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PostSubject: Broken Sparrow   Broken Sparrow EmptyMon Jan 02, 2012 5:15 am




Broken Sparrow
By Scott Newport


A gentle breeze came by today
Bumped by a jog in the day
A small sparrow was soon on his path
And realized, permafrost

He started to thaw, mission central-
When he found his direction uneasy
Weaving and bobbing became a way of flight

Clutched by his breath as though-
He was tied up
The highest tree,
Snared by his own memories

Escaping to roost he laid his thoughts
And found himself-
Broken sparrow
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vinedresser
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Join date : 2011-10-10
Location : Arkansas

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PostSubject: Re: Broken Sparrow   Broken Sparrow EmptyMon Jan 02, 2012 5:27 am
Almost hurts to read thid one, scottn, feels like a whole lot goin on inside, or you are really gifted at taking a thought and expressing it. Touching, to say the least. Love the style, bro.
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PostSubject: Re: Broken Sparrow   Broken Sparrow EmptyMon Jan 02, 2012 3:56 pm
That gave me shivers down my spine. I love your style too. It allows the reader to apply to his or herself in the way she or he sees it.
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