Hello Mike,
Welcome to Christian Creative Writers. I am thrilled that you joined us. I happen to enjoy critiquing writer's work, however, I would prefer to do it on this website. Otherwise, I'm afraid you might not get much of a response to your blog. If you like, you can copy and paste your story in a critique section in one of the categories (e.g. Fiction, Non Fiction, etc.). I only request that your work is free of profanity or vulgar content.