Jak Hardy WRITER (51-100 posts)
POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 82 Age : 27 Join date : 2011-11-07 Location : Sunshine Coast, Australia
| Subject: Divine Paternity Wed Jan 25, 2012 4:50 pm | |
| On the edge, the sleeve hem of your robe, You wipe away beads of unresolved emotion, Tears of regret. Guilt. Cold isolation. In arms of tender fatherhood. Fatherhood denied. In warm embrace. Hope. Security. In sovereign arms, in Eagle's wings. Protection. Through ear, a cry- a sweet yearning, echoing in depth. My Father's heart ticks. Beats. A rhythmic calling. A synchronised commission. In the hands that crafted eternity- Wrote redemption in the stars: My future. Hope. Security. He leads me to reignition. To rest. To His heart. As I rest in He, He rests in Me. He tucks me into sacred eternity, holy forevermore. From carnal reality to celestial vitality. Blood stained fatherhood. Divine paternity. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Divine Paternity Wed Jan 25, 2012 10:52 pm | |
| Your work is so beautiful. It transports one into heavenly places. Especially loved the way you kicked this one off:
On the edge, the sleeve hem of your robe, You wipe away beads of unresolved emotion, Tears of regret. Guilt. Cold isolation. In arms of tender fatherhood. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: Divine Paternity Sat Feb 11, 2012 5:36 pm | |
| - Quote :
- A synchronised commission.
In the hands that crafted eternity- Wrote redemption in the stars: My future. Hope. Security. |
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rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: Re: Divine Paternity Sun Feb 12, 2012 1:30 am | |
| Man! Well written, brotha. Word. And congrat's on winning the contest. That one was fantastic as well. |
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