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Jak Hardy
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PostSubject: Divine Paternity   Divine Paternity EmptyWed Jan 25, 2012 4:50 pm

On the edge, the sleeve hem of your robe,
You wipe away beads of unresolved emotion,
Tears of regret. Guilt. Cold isolation.
In arms of tender fatherhood.
Fatherhood denied.
In warm embrace. Hope. Security.
In sovereign arms, in Eagle's wings. Protection.
Through ear, a cry- a sweet yearning, echoing in depth.
My Father's heart ticks. Beats. A rhythmic calling.
A synchronised commission.
In the hands that crafted eternity-
Wrote redemption in the stars:
My future. Hope. Security.
He leads me to reignition. To rest.
To His heart. As I rest in He, He rests in Me.
He tucks me into sacred eternity, holy forevermore.
From carnal reality to celestial vitality.
Blood stained fatherhood.
Divine paternity.
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Lora
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Location : Southern CA

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PostSubject: Re: Divine Paternity   Divine Paternity EmptyWed Jan 25, 2012 10:52 pm

Your work is so beautiful. It transports one into heavenly places. Especially loved the way you kicked this one off:

On the edge, the sleeve hem of your robe,
You wipe away beads of unresolved emotion,
Tears of regret. Guilt. Cold isolation.
In arms of tender fatherhood.
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oneagleswings
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PostSubject: Re: Divine Paternity   Divine Paternity EmptySat Feb 11, 2012 4:09 pm




Awesome!


thank you
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Thena
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PostSubject: Re: Divine Paternity   Divine Paternity EmptySat Feb 11, 2012 5:36 pm

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A synchronised commission.
In the hands that crafted eternity-
Wrote redemption in the stars:
My future. Hope. Security.
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rhymarhyma
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PostSubject: Re: Divine Paternity   Divine Paternity EmptySun Feb 12, 2012 1:30 am

Man! Well written, brotha. Word. And congrat's on winning the contest. That one was fantastic as well.
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