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PostSubject: HELLO LORD   HELLO LORD EmptyThu Jan 26, 2012 8:32 pm



Hello Lord, I've come to chat
About the coming day
Knowing You have plans for me
Means You must have Your way
So I offer up myself
My thoughts, my words, my deeds
Everything I give to You
The blossoms and the weeds.

I'm a long way from the line
And as I run the race
I realise that I'm not good
At seeking out Your face
Other things get in the way
Obliterate my view
I am missing oh so much
In fact I'm missing You.
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Location : Southern CA

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PostSubject: Re: HELLO LORD   HELLO LORD EmptyThu Jan 26, 2012 9:39 pm
So far, this is my favorite of yours. I love the message and the creativity of this one.
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PostSubject: Re: HELLO LORD   HELLO LORD EmptyFri Jan 27, 2012 2:03 pm
I love how you love the Lord!
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PostSubject: Re: HELLO LORD   HELLO LORD EmptyTue Jan 31, 2012 4:00 pm

This was so humbling and honest...liked it :)
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