Wordsculptor
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| Broken hallelujahs
Broken hallelujahs;
caustic calls of crucify,
the hill christens the dying.
Broken hallelujahs;
thorny prince
with piercing crown.
Broken hallelujahs;
tears, blood, pain
and the shock of nail.
Broken hallelujahs;
at the dawn of eternity
the flag of death is hoisted.
Broken hallelujahs;
eyes close who cannot stare
God shuts out the light.
Broken hallelujahs;
only the tunic relies
on the turn of a dice.
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Lora
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| Loved this one on fb. The visuals are powerful and heart stirring. Awesome work! |
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