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crystalleek
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PostSubject: Today I want it now.   Today I want it now. EmptyFri Sep 02, 2011 6:27 pm

Falling under the barrel I sin,
Whipping fury unto my kin,
Iniquitous, is the the beast in its den.
Forgive thy? forgive thy? relinquish thy sin!
I promise! I promise!...
Ive tricked you again.
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PostSubject: Re: Today I want it now.   Today I want it now. EmptyFri Sep 02, 2011 7:31 pm

This was me and is evident in much of my earlier writings. Some of the things I've posted go back 16 years or more.
The double-mindedness plagued me for quite some time...a learned behavior and very difficult to break free from though not impossible.
Being Saved is only the beginning of baby steps.
Very short yet intensely convicting and thought provoking !
God Bless.
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Lora
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PostSubject: Re: Today I want it now.   Today I want it now. EmptyFri Sep 02, 2011 7:37 pm

Deep! That gave me goosebumps. Even as repentant sinners, we still let other down. Yet, we are still forgiven by a very Good and Faithful God because of the tremendous price Jesus paid with his blood. Your work is moving, to say the least. God Bless you.
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axiom1988
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PostSubject: Re: Today I want it now.   Today I want it now. EmptySat Sep 03, 2011 7:45 am

THE SIN FROM WITHOUT HAS A PRESENCE WITHIN
WITH ROOT THROUG A BLOODSTREAM
AFFECTIOUS TO KIN
FOR AS HOLY IS THE LAMB
OH LET ME WASH IN HIS BLOOD
LET ME RISE IN RENEW...
BORN CLEANSED FROM HIS LOVE

AXIOM1988
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PostSubject: Re: Today I want it now.   Today I want it now. EmptySat Sep 03, 2011 7:46 am

I LOVE IT.
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crystalleek
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PostSubject: Re: Today I want it now.   Today I want it now. EmptySun Sep 11, 2011 6:56 am

yes I am at a point in my life where I have learned the wrong way, and it is much easier.
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