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Subject: Eyes From Heaven
Sun Sep 04, 2011 9:53 pm
EYES FROM HEAVEN
I've seen her eyes...........beauty defined
A treasure within my own heart and mind
They've breached my soul...swam deep within
Touched every deed..............drank of my sin
Scolded me.............brought me low
Shone like sun..........her joy bestow
They now look down from up above
Heaven's gaze..........a cooing dove
For an Angel's eyes....I have a cause
Do right always...without great pause
All my life................I bore her stare
Now her eyes.......... are everywhere
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Subject: Re: Eyes From Heaven
Sun Sep 04, 2011 10:24 pm
A very transcendental eulogy with a very unique structure. Loved it.
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