bookworm118 NEW KID ON THE BLOCK (0-5 Posts)
Posts : 4 Age : 30 Join date : 2012-05-18 Location : Texas, United States
| Subject: Time to Let Go Fri May 18, 2012 9:34 pm | |
| This song means so much to me, because I believe God gave me the words to comfort me when I struggle. They've helped me through some difficult times, and I hope you won't mind me sharing them with you.
Verse 1:
Oh I know that you're down You think you're all on your own You wonder if life will be Spent stranded and alone Can't you see? There's a future hope for you Take my hand I'll be sure to see you through
Chorus:
It's time to let go It's time to let go Of the worries, troubles, fears Your desires and your years I'll lead you through, it's time to let go
Verse 2:
Your hope will be renewed When you truly do fear me And surrender all the hurt Only then you'll be set free Can't you see? You're a lamb within my arms Take my hand I will keep you safe from harm
Bridge:
I know it's hard The way is full of pain It will be worth it When you meet me face to face
Thank you for looking! If you have any feedback, I'm willing to listen. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Time to Let Go Fri May 18, 2012 11:30 pm | |
| First of all, I find it to be a breath a fresh air to see someone so young who loves the Lord as you do. It's plain to see that in your work. You're very talented and I can't wait to see what else you've written. Your lyrics flow nicely and it is very well written. I wouldn't change a thing about it. I found only one very small punctuation error in the first line. There should be a comma after the word "Oh." Other than that, outstanding work! |
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