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Len Williams Carver
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Len Williams Carver

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PostSubject: AFRAID   AFRAID EmptyWed Jan 23, 2013 8:51 pm

AFRAID


This feeling afraid to share
Misery so very unfair

Hard to bear all this pain

Playing with feelings like a game

Move on from this despair and pain
Tired of tears and fears… going to dream

I am woman I am strong
No more will I be wrong

No more hanging head in shame
No more guilt, regret or blame



I believe in the miracles of choice

I kneel to pray, listening for His voice

For my Master’s love I wish to attain
I will achieve by this one true refrain
To You Lord I give my all I surrender

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PostSubject: Re: AFRAID   AFRAID EmptyThu Jan 31, 2013 12:14 am

This one is very moving. Awesome work! I love the way you took us from despair to healing.
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PostSubject: Re: AFRAID   AFRAID EmptyThu Jan 31, 2013 9:32 am

You are loved. Word. Beautiful poem, for sure.
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PostSubject: Re: AFRAID   AFRAID EmptyThu Jan 31, 2013 10:15 am

Quote :
I kneel to pray, listening for His voice

For my Master’s love I wish to attain
I will achieve by this one true refrain
To You Lord I give my all I surrender


Love this verse especially
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PostSubject: Re: AFRAID   AFRAID EmptyFri Feb 01, 2013 2:16 pm

I'm "afraid" i just love the heart that goes into your work!
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