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CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Recurring themes in dreams Sat May 18, 2013 4:55 am | |
| Phantom limbs, nervous twitches scratching at air and unseen itches everything is still in place though it doesn't feel that way clasping hands together to pray knees arrest to a submissive position toes pressed against the ground losing face... disappearing without a trace in this place, displaced yet unerased like a cargo ship's hull looming in scant clearance of bottom feeders existence
In due time underway into open see schools of flying fish in presence of saints and angels break the surface unexpectedly commotion in the calm beyond the disturbance of forward motion all stands still ahead clear as glass while a-wake dissipates astern in the distance reclaimed by the calm into the horizon all evidence is gone of ever having passed this way evaporating, arising, condensing... only to fall again absorbed by swells of pride as the setting sun slowly sinks into the sea |
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rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: Re: Recurring themes in dreams Sun May 19, 2013 8:53 pm | |
| Dang! That was sure me the other night, yo. That does it! I was gonna blow off this rhyme idea and crash, but yet again, I have been inspired by my brotha. Right on, write on. Word. |
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