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PostSubject: Today   Today EmptyMon Sep 19, 2011 5:46 pm

Today I thought of yesterday
Not with remorse or pain
But with loving memories
As I relived happy times again.

My thoughts went back to earliest days
Of memories oh so sweet
When I was just a little kid
And a lollipop was a treat!

I remembering learning to tie my shoe
And then moving right along
I rode a bike versus a trike
And learned to sing a song.

I thought of happy days in school
And even those that made me sad
Looking back on them today
They don't seem to be so bad.

I thought about my one big fall
And it wasn't from a shove
But rather it was the happiest kind...
The day I fell in love!

My wedding memories are so sweet
And when with pregnancy I was blessed
I have such precious memories of
A little bundle of purest happiness.

Those days of loss and heartache
When I lost family that I love
Are countered by the knowledge
That they reside with God above.

And as I grow much older
And have fewer days to live
I try to sort out my life to determine
Just what do I have to give.

If I could offer one profound thought
To help some of you get through
I would say just these 4 little words
Remember God loves you!

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PostSubject: Re: Today   Today EmptyMon Sep 19, 2011 6:20 pm

Wow, what a mixture of pure bliss and heartache. You did an excellent job of painting a picture of life and it's ups and downs. This is a very endearing poem. I'd like to print it and keep it by my desk if that's alright with you. I'll of course include the author's full name with the piece.


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PostSubject: Re: Today   Today EmptyMon Sep 19, 2011 6:27 pm

I would consider that an honor if you kept a copy.
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PostSubject: Re: Today   Today EmptyMon Sep 19, 2011 6:31 pm

Thank you, but the honor is mine. Many blessings.
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PostSubject: Re: Today   Today EmptyMon Sep 19, 2011 9:57 pm

That is really really great. I love the positivity you bring thru the pain. All glory to the Father.
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