The first time i called his name

it was in vain when i called his name i didnt know how my life would change and that my life would never be the same i will do my best but its hard to explain.i always use to hear how God can help us. i couldnt see him so it was hard to trust. and i met a guy and he peached the word. that was the first time that in my heart i heard. he told me that he can see how i thirst but i didnt believe,in order to achieve i had to believe. in the God that created me.that apart of me had to die in order for me to become alive. i was very puzzled at his sayings so i went home and started praying.i knew my friends would become few and i started reading the book of mattew.as i read. look and you should find about the sheeps that are mine. and he will be with me all the time. my mind body and heart and no matter where i go we will never be apart.when mother in father forsaken me he will be there. and no matter what happen he will help me bear.and dont depend on men they will fail. men make you cry and it is written you lie to die.when times get hard he wont bail. and to cast my problems on him as big as a whale.and the devil is no more to blame the first time i called his name.

bigpy8 wrote:

It was in vain when i called his name.
I didn't know how my life would change,
and that my life would never be the same.
I will do my best, but its hard to explain.

I always use to hear, how God can help us.
I couldn't see him so it was hard to trust,
and I met a guy and he preached the word.
that was the first time that in my heart I heard.

He told me that he can see how i thirst but I didn't believe,
in order to achieve i had to believe,
in the God that created me.
That apart of me had to die,
in order for me to become alive.

I was very puzzled at his sayings,
so i went home and started praying.
I knew my friends would become few
and I started reading the book of Mathew.

As I read. look and you should find,
about the sheep that are mine.
And he will be with me all the time.
My mind body and heart,
and no matter where I go we will never be apart.
When mother in father forsaken me, he will be there.
And no matter what happen he will help me bear.

And don't depend on men, they will fail.
Men make you cry,
and it is written you lie to die.
When times get hard He wont bail.

And to cast my problems on him, as big as a whale,
and the devil is no more to blame,
the first time I called his name.

Hello bigpy8. Welcome to Christian Creative Writers! We are glad to have you and see your work. This is a wonderful poem. I love the way you describe how a person came to Jesus. That's always something to give the Good Lord praise for. I thought I would format it a little bit so you could see what it would look like. I don't know if I broke the lines at the right places, but I gave it an educated guess. Hope you like it!

Great poem, bigpy8! Way to work those words. Excellent message, as well. Word.