Yahu
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 |  Subject: I Have a Good God Sat Aug 20, 2016 11:41 am | |
| I have a good God
He takes care of me
When I am low.
I am often low
And low is the valley
Upon which I travail
Low is the valley
Upon which I travail. |
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oneagleswings
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| | Subject: Re: I Have a Good God Sat Aug 20, 2016 11:51 am | |
| "Even in a garden nourished solely by the tears of past sorrows, something beautiful, may yet...still grow"-O.E.W. |
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Lora
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| | Subject: Re: I Have a Good God Sat Aug 20, 2016 11:56 am | |
| Beautifully put! Welcome to CCW  |
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oneagleswings
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| | Subject: Re: I Have a Good God Sat Aug 20, 2016 12:14 pm | |
| You used "travail" twice to great effect in few words overall:)
Nicely done. |
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Yahu
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| | Subject: Re: I Have a Good God Sat Aug 20, 2016 12:33 pm | |
| Thank you oneagleswings and Lora! I very much appreciate your words. |
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