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 To hold my hand, to help me stand

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rhymarhyma
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PostSubject: To hold my hand, to help me stand   To hold my hand, to help me stand EmptyThu Apr 05, 2012 8:05 pm

A love so true that it forgives
the treacherous life a dead man lives...

I can't remember, but I wanna remember
A fleeting memory, and it burns like an ember
The first time, the last time, the next time I cry
Will you hold me in your arms until my tears run dry
I let you go and I've left your side
and the memory of your hurt hurts deep inside
Why did I do the things I did, why do I do the things I do
Why do you always wait for me, why is your love for me so true
It pains me to know that I cause you pain
but it calms me to know you're my shelter in the rain

I can't forget, but I wanna forget
the feelings that I felt in the sea of regret
I can't undo what's already been done
and I can't live life livin' on the run
Runnin' from the wrongs without makin' things right
and chasin' all the shadows in the middle of the night
I have to come correct or not come at all
and trust you'll catch me should I fall
and know you'll be there when I land
to hold my hand, to help me stand
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To hold my hand, to help me stand 173236763 Beautiful message and very well put.
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Well put indeed. Yer pain and repentance is palpable. Love the hope you convey.
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