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Thena
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PostSubject: Won't You Come into My Garden (2004)   Won't You Come into My Garden (2004) EmptyMon Mar 05, 2012 12:24 pm
Won't you come into my garden
My little one so dear
The flowers have a song
I'd love for you to hear...

Listen for their music
In the quietness of the day;
Their leaves rustle in the breeze
In a sweet melodic way.

I ask this favor little one,
If this one thing you would do
Won't you come into my garden?
I'd love my flowers to see you...

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PostSubject: Re: Won't You Come into My Garden (2004)   Won't You Come into My Garden (2004) EmptyTue Mar 06, 2012 9:48 am


Quite the quaint piece...ahhh bring on Spring..hurry up Enough of Winter already ?!
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PostSubject: Re: Won't You Come into My Garden (2004)   Won't You Come into My Garden (2004) EmptyTue Mar 06, 2012 12:28 pm
...as i'm reading this, there is a beagle howling on the back deck outside my window and two mini daschunds joining in the chorus. can i send them to your garden, i need a break?
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PostSubject: Re: Won't You Come into My Garden (2004)   Won't You Come into My Garden (2004) EmptyTue Mar 06, 2012 2:32 pm
My flowers would love them! 🐕
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PostSubject: Re: Won't You Come into My Garden (2004)   Won't You Come into My Garden (2004) EmptyTue Mar 06, 2012 3:56 pm
I just love your sweet poetry Thena!

onbagleswings:
I want to borrow them for a while! I love goggies!


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PostSubject: Re: Won't You Come into My Garden (2004)   Won't You Come into My Garden (2004) EmptyTue Mar 06, 2012 4:05 pm
send a shipping crate...no air holes!
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PostSubject: Re: Won't You Come into My Garden (2004)   Won't You Come into My Garden (2004) EmptyThu Mar 08, 2012 2:20 pm
Your poetry is so loving and endearing; can't help to envision the colors sun rays producing shining through a filed of blossoms.
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