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PostSubject: A revelation from God   A revelation from God EmptyThu Apr 19, 2012 5:56 am

The sunrise awoke me from a horrible sleep.
I had nightmares of falling into a hole oh so deep.
I knew that something was just not right today.
I could tell but did not know quite what way.
I looked at the sun,
and it seemed to smile.
Curious as to why it looked so vile.
Fangs with a smik that was oh so devious.
Looking like evil things bore to be mischievous.
The next moment I knew for certain why.
When the sky opened up,
and eveything seemed to die.
The plants were crying and people were dying,
and everything all around me was in pain.
Souls were screaming.
As demons were beaming.
They knew it was thier day.
I looked and cries not knowing what was happening.
All around me the earth was crashing.

But then in the mist of all this chaos and furry.
I heard a small and soft voice that was kind of blurry.
Trying to tune out the agony and shrieks.
I listened to the voice,
so quiet and weak.
But i became louder and stronger.
And each note it sang became piercing and longer.
I fell to the ground and trembled in fright.
The song that it sang was under the light.
I looked into its eyes beaming with power.
But rebuked it with words I learned while a todler.
People all around were crying just as I.
But something was different.
I didn't die.
I could fell the blood racing through my heart,
as the sky turned to black,
and the sea began to part.
The trees dripped blood,
and the stars turned to shards.
Every living creature walked in it's skeleton,
covered in scar.
Instruments of all kind and key began to play,
a song of death that loomed over the earth
on such a devastating day.
Everything with breath shrieked and cries.
And in the middle of it all.
Something caught my eye,
Th demon wanted a second round.
I gasped,
knowing in that very second I would be bound.
I would not give up.
I had to see this light.
I felt a pang of pain shoot up my spine.
The thing hissed "You disobeyed and now you will die!"

In that moment.
I grabbed the candle of light.
In that instant everything frove for what seemed like forever.
But i still had the candle and could move where ever.
I looked upon the earth in which we sadly lived our lives.
Covered in haterd and sin and death.
Which was our reality.
Was our lives.
The truth exposed in a moment of perfect clarity.
I looked in awe as this was or sad reality.

I heard annother voice from on high.
It was soft and still,
but loving this time.
It told me that what I saw was all the earth,
and it's sin.
I fell down and cried wondering how sucha thing could win.
It is captive over us and sules us inside.
But we have a choice.
To live,
Or to die.

I opened my eyes and looked upon His Majesty.
He was covered in white and bathed in Holy tapestry.
He offered me His hand and looked into my eyes.
I grabbed it,
fell at His knees and began to cry.
"What is all of this?
What did I see?
Why is all the earth dying except for me?"
He showed me the people how were tained and scared.
Distored and hurt,
in pain and marred.
He said, "I offer my hand to these poeple everyday.
But they refuse my love and continue this way."
I looked and I saw a tear in His eye.
The love for the poeple,
but they choose to die.
He turned back and gave me a command.
To go and tell of the tales i have witnessed at hand.
I fell at His fett and He lowered Himself to me.
He told me "I love you.
Now go and tell of what you've seen."

In that instant i awoke t see the sunrise.
It was so glorious it brought tears to my eyes.
Something told me that was more than a dream.
A living reality but is unseen.
I looked out my window and saw a young girl.
She was sitting alone in a doorway and seemed hurt.
I remembered that hurt,
and walked out the door.
I sat down next to the girl and told her of a person to adore.
She smile for a minute.
And the I saw the lie.
"Don't listen" I told her "just grab the light."
She looked at me for a minute then said alright,
She looked down and began to cry.
And in that moment I knew why.
Lifting her head,
I saw Him in her eyes.
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PostSubject: Re: A revelation from God   A revelation from God EmptyThu Apr 19, 2012 2:47 pm

Wow, that knocked my socks off. What a powerful and touching piece. With a few spelling and grammar corrections, it would be an exquisite piece. Nice work! A revelation from God 2563768304
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PostSubject: Re: A revelation from God   A revelation from God EmptyFri Apr 20, 2012 11:13 am

So glad you joined us! I look forward to reading more of your work. It's wonderful to know the Lord when you are young and to write so powerfully.
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