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 Her name is Hope

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Malakhim
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PostSubject: Her name is Hope   Her name is Hope EmptyWed Oct 31, 2012 8:45 pm

As you can see a trend starting with "Her name is Joy" now this, next is "Her name is Faith" thank you guys for support!

Her name is Hope and she wears it like a badge of honor
But God knows things changed when the darkness fell upon her
She's the type always open never broken and wears her heart on her sleeve
But never did she see the day coming when her name would leave

Everyone leaves she says
Winter spring summer fall
The leaves leave the trees leaving behind leaves across the ground sprawled
Hoping that someone would come along and collect them all
But no one came, they only left her
She's come to full realization that no one person can come along and collect her
She needs a Saviour
One above the seasons
She needs back her name
And to be given all the reasons
To be called a daughter
And be a bride
But In the end all Hope needs to do...
Is swallow her pride
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PostSubject: Re: Her name is Hope   Her name is Hope EmptyThu Nov 01, 2012 2:02 am

Patience is her name, one of the children i sponsor...the name was a surprise because i didn't choose the child the worker at world vision did. i was too afraid to pray for "patience" but i was sent "patience" anyway, He has a wonderful sense of irony and humor, Amen!

It's a pretty neat theme you've got going here!
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PostSubject: Re: Her name is Hope   Her name is Hope EmptyFri Nov 02, 2012 1:51 am

Beautiful piece. You've got some great skill as a poet. I love the way you delivered the message through this one. It's well written and full of truth.
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PostSubject: Re: Her name is Hope   Her name is Hope EmptySat Nov 03, 2012 7:58 am

Finally got the computer to cooperate, Good words Bro, the last two lines reverberate the needs of most all who desire to follow Christ. Swallow Our Pride. Good stuff.
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PostSubject: Re: Her name is Hope   Her name is Hope EmptySat Nov 03, 2012 1:46 pm

I'm catching up on my reading of posts and this was a special one to start with.
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