Doug Blair ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 644 Age : 73 Join date : 2013-02-03 Location : Waterloo, Ontario, Canada
| Subject: Treachery's Kiss Sun Feb 03, 2013 10:04 am | |
| Treachery's Kiss
The kiss upon the cheek. The countenance glazed With feigned friendship. The onlookers in the know With slander, besmirching And judgment. The menacing swords Having Father’s approval, Furthering His plan.
Still I must forgive. Count it all loss For the excellency Of His better. I have right, words And power to silence All scoffing. But I shall not, And He shall have His way.
And I shall rise In some bright morn Of recompense. And postures, And much unfeeling, Found shining in wondrous Family likeness; Beside an empty tomb. The hate forgot.
Psalm 16: 9-11
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Treachery's Kiss Wed Mar 20, 2013 11:08 pm | |
| I like the flow and theme, but I had trouble with the point of view. I couldn't tell if you were writing from your point of view, the Lord's, or switching back and forth. |
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Doug Blair ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 644 Age : 73 Join date : 2013-02-03 Location : Waterloo, Ontario, Canada
| Subject: Re: Treachery's Kiss Thu Mar 21, 2013 3:02 am | |
| It's just a picture of Gethsemane and of Jesus' incomparable submission to the will of the Father. There is an interesting painting by James Tissot showing the flashing forth of Jesus' divinity in front of the Temple guards, causing them to fall backward to the ground (John 18). Surely our Lord was in charge of His own arrest. He waited for them to re-compose. He held forth His hands for the shackles (the embodiment of Psalm 118).
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