Doug Blair ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 644 Age : 73 Join date : 2013-02-03 Location : Waterloo, Ontario, Canada
| Subject: Poets' Evangel Thu Mar 07, 2013 9:43 pm | |
| Poets' Evangel
It's a mirror It's a ladder It's a weapon for Mansoul It's a bombast From the Christ past Crying now to be made whole.
It's a comfort For the wounded And a hospice for their hurt It's a warning To the haughty That their Father came from dirt.
It's another Look at Calvary And another, yet again It's a resume On Jesus Working still today for men.
It's a fairground For the senses But it must not leave the trail Of the journey Ever upward By the folk who pass Death's Vale.
It's an invite To the wayward And a shelter for their night It's adoption To a family Resting, washed and safe and right.
It's an offering From the heart's purse With but two small mites in hand. It's a blessing To the poets That they hardly understand.
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Poets' Evangel Tue Apr 30, 2013 8:40 pm | |
| I love the fast pace and repetitive lines in this one.It has an especially great message. Nice work. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Poets' Evangel Wed May 01, 2013 2:13 am | |
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Doug Blair ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 644 Age : 73 Join date : 2013-02-03 Location : Waterloo, Ontario, Canada
| Subject: Re: Poets' Evangel Wed May 01, 2013 4:18 am | |
| Thanks Lori for your comment. The internet is such an amazing thing for touching people...who knows where...Doug |
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