rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: To no person goes the glory Mon Mar 18, 2013 10:26 pm | |
| I remember that day like yesterday as you slowly closed the door when you were walking away and I told myself that everything would be fine It wasn't the end of the world, just the end of mine...
A single red rose knows no shame yet even a rose bows down to the beauty of your name When you came into my life, all time stood still Was it the thrill of the hunt, or just the hunt of the thrill "TLA" is what the tattoo said but the "Always" part is where I got misled I thought always meant always, not just a little while You only laugh when I hurt, and I only hurt when you smile Did you ever even really kind of love me at all or did you just get a rise out of watching me fall It's a long way down when your heart is so broken and "I don't love you anymore" are the hardest words spoken yet you said them so easily, so calmly to me and you left me feeling empty because you had to fly free...
I gave all my love to a woman, and that's where I went wrong You were my muse, my rhyme, my verse, my song but by glorifying you, my sweet, I showed our love was a fraud To no person goes the glory, all glory to God... |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: To no person goes the glory Sat Mar 23, 2013 11:01 am | |
| Amen! You said it:
I gave all my love to a woman, and that's where I went wrong You were my muse, my rhyme, my verse, my song but by glorifying you, my sweet, I showed our love was a fraud To no person goes the glory, all glory to God... |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: To no person goes the glory Sat Mar 23, 2013 11:15 am | |
| You're writing is like a "snickers" candy bar...satisfying and filling! |
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