cleo574 WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 542 Age : 77 Join date : 2011-08-18 Location : Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
| Subject: Jesus Said Thu Sep 01, 2011 9:24 pm | |
| JESUS SAID By Jan Phillips You can climb the highest mountain You can swim the deepest sea But the path to paradise is still through me. You can walk the longest highway You can drive the longest miles But the path to paradise is still through me. I gave you free will to do as you wish You can go to work or just go fish But the path to paradise is still through me. You can travel from state to state To see what you can see But the path to paradise is still through me. You can drink the evil spirits Until you can’t walk or stand But the path to paradise is still through me. You can get high on dope And live in a fog But the path to paradise is still through me. You can work every day From dawn to dusk But the path to paradise is still through me. You can be good to your fellow man And be as nice as you can be But the path to paradise is still through me. Try as you might Doing what’s right The path to paradise is still through me [center] |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Jesus Said Thu Sep 01, 2011 10:50 pm | |
| Please don't ever stop reminding me of this, God bless. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Jesus Said Thu Sep 01, 2011 11:28 pm | |
| You used quite an interesting style, using the refrain every third line to drive home the point. Very nicely done cleo574. Loved it. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Jesus Said Sun Dec 25, 2011 11:57 pm | |
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