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rhymarhyma
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PostSubject: Don't be afraid of the water   Don't be afraid of the water EmptyThu Aug 25, 2011 10:57 pm

Shhhh...close your eyes, and feel the peace rush in

No more pain, no more rain, let your forever begin

Don't be afraid, child, don't be afraid of the water

for I am the water of life and I'm here for you, daughter

Take hold of my hand and I will ease all your fears

Dry off your hair and I will dry all your tears

For twenty-three years I've watched you roam

just waiting for the moment when I would take you home

Waiting for the time when we would never be apart

When you would be in my house like you've been in my heart

Well, tonight is that time, hear the angel as he sings

Now rise with me, my angel, because you've earned your wings

I promise, worry not for your family and friends

I will comfort them, and cradle them, until each heart mends

Now grab your friend and let's go, because he's as precious as you

You see, it's written in my hand that I would be coming for two
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PostSubject: Re: Don't be afraid of the water   Don't be afraid of the water EmptyFri Aug 26, 2011 4:48 am

Wow. I closed my eyes periodically while reading this and could hear Yeshua utter the words. I like your still in each of your works. This one, could almost be put to music.
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PostSubject: Re: Don't be afraid of the water   Don't be afraid of the water EmptyFri Aug 26, 2011 4:50 pm

Right on. My friend and her boyfriend had a fatal car accident that ended up in the bottom of a lake :-( I wrote this for her sister.
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